Monday, June 02, 2008

Moment

An unfinished poem in back pocket
.... searching for emotions

A rusted Cross around the neck
.... testing the faith

A worn out shirt with an old jeans
.... experiencing the mortality

A thread tied on the right hand
.... connecting to the roots

A moment captured to come back to....

14 comments:

d SINNER!!! said...

beautiful...

this is on the sinner's recommendation tab...hope u dont mind...

:)

Prakhar said...

Well thankz!

i dun mind :D

Nancy said...

Each line comes across as clearly as a painting. Does that make sense:-P?

Beauty and the BEast said...

A lone boat drowning in the drizzle
.... fighting a lost battle

A shabby poster in a rundown room
.... seeking the courage to dream

An old shawl on a forgotten loft
.... remembering being alive

A moment lost never to find

Prakhar said...

@Nancy
Well that clearly make sense :)...thanks!

Prakhar said...

@ B n B

Moments are lost memories are not :)

Keshi said...

brilliant!

LOVED IT.

Keshi.

Prakhar said...

@ Keshi

Thanks :)

Beauty and the BEast said...

So true..

memories just fade..

ranjana said...

....different facets....different experiences n emotions....rebel and a believer.....all merge into one....beautiful

Prakhar said...

@ Ranjana

Rebel .. I dun know....but ya believer I am!...Thanks :)

Sach said...

An unfinished poem in back pocket
.... searching for emotions

I believe there's nothing as true as this! Very well written...

Prakhar said...

@Sach

Thanks :)

imperfect said...

An unfinished promise
..holding on the faith in hope.

A few unsaid words
...trusting the silent conversations

A beautiful dream
...reason to live! :D