Tuesday, August 05, 2008

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I know its cheating...putting up old poems...but this one is only a few months old...and seeing the response for the previous embarrassing one..I thought this one deserves to be there...also it has been very long since I posted...so here it is...another of my embarrassing ones...nd reason..i think you can easily guess

आंखें हो रही हैं बंद, दिमाग रुक सा गया है
पी रखी है मैने, अंदर एक इंसान जाग सा गया है

बिना पिये कुछ बातें बोल नहीं पाता
पीता हूं तो सब कुछ लिखने को दिल है चाहता

लिखता हूं एक पहचान के लिये
जिसे दुनिया याद रखे मेरे जाने के बाद
पर जाने से डरता हूं मैं...अभी कुछ देर और

कलम रुक सी रही है, मोहब्ब्त बढ सी रही है
पर ये मोहब्बत है मोहब्ब्त से शायद
तुम ही आती हो ख्यालों में
इकतरफ़ा मोहब्बत है शायद..

क्या करूं ऎ परवरदिगार, कुछ इशारा कर
ये पैगाम ही पहुंचा के थोडा रहम कर

28 comments:

پريانکا said...

pegaam main pauncha deti hun :D

Prakhar said...

us time pahunchana tha....ab to no use!!

Keshi said...

again, only for Hindi-readers :)

Keshi.

Prakhar said...

@Keshi

Well nothing gr8 abt this one either...i wrote it when i was drunk nd silly ofcourse..nd thats what is written in hindi...

also y i write...nd a lil abt my infatuation at that time..nd a prayer to the almighty for some solace!

joiedevivre said...

cheater
cheater
cheater

waise peene ke baad u write well
haha

gud
nice one

joiedevivre said...

**कलम रुक सी रही है, मोहब्ब्त बढ सी रही है
पर ये मोहब्बत है मोहब्ब्त से शायद

very beautiful

Solitaire said...

Main hindi poems padh nahi paati.
:(

Anyway, wanted to tell you that the photo tag results are up on Warm Fuzzies.

Prakhar said...

@Sol
hmm...u need hindi in Sonia gandhi style:P..okie here u go..
-------------------------
Ankhen ho rahi hai band..dimag ruk sa gaya hai
pi rakhi hai maine ..andar ek insaan jaag sa gaya hai

bina piye kuch baateing bol nahin paata
pita hun to sab kuch likhne ko dil hai chahta

likhta hun ek pehchan ke liye..
jise duniya yaad rakhe mere jaane ke baad
par jaane se darta hun mai...abhi kuch der aur sahi...

kalam ruk si rahi hai, mohabbat badh si rahi hai...
par yeh mohabbat hai mohabbat se shayad

tum hi aati ho khayalon me..
iktarfa mohabbat hai shayad...

kya karun, e parvardigaar, kuch ishara kar...
ye paigaam pahuncha ke thoda raham kar..
----------------------------
..OK writing this was also embarrassing...wl try gujrati font next time..wat say?

arre I saw the results y'day itself..was very anxious..guess i flunked big time!! :D

Solitaire said...

WOW! Thanks Prakhar! You put so much efforts.

I love the line..mohabbat hai mohabbat se shayad. So many of us are so in love with the idea of being in love that we glorify it, and then when our expectations are not met, we are heart-broken.

So well-written!

Prakhar said...

@Sol

well it was worth the effort...as got the exact point which i wanted to convey..thanks!

Prakhar said...

@Joie

Well I was thinkin of startin one Drunken Blog..but realised it was costly affair..nd not gud for health too :D

Thanks!! :)

Keshi said...

awww its ok :)

tnxx!

Keshi.

ray said...

Hi ,

I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘JACKWISE’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;

BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!

This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)

Cheers,

Keshi said...

Go check out the winners in my blog! ;-)


Keshi.

HOBO said...

Maan ka ho to achcha,
Na ho to aur bhi achcha...

HOBO said...

Maan ka ho to achcha,
Na ho to aur bhi achcha...

A Liberated Soul said...

Oops! Did I come to a poetry world? I dont read Hindi! :(

Ps said...

sounds great to me--maybe because i could actually understand it.Most of the hindi poetry i read otherwise goes over my head.
Cheers
preeti

Cuckoo said...

वो नशे में करते हैं इज़हार-ऐ-मोहब्बत
अरे कभी होश में आकर तो कहें ज़रा
बैठें हैं हम इसी इंतज़ार में
कभी हमें भी तो पिला कर कहें ज़रा

You have written well. When is the next ? :)

Cuckoo

Reflections said...

So many dilemma's. I'm sure both ur infactuation & Almighty took note:-).

Keshi said...

hey 'cheater' :) hows u?

is that u in the new pic? wow!

Keshi.

Prakhar said...

@hobo
Very well said..but yaar kabhi to mann ka ho!! :(

Prakhar said...

@liberated Soul
I usually post poems ...wl post some english ones too!!

Prakhar said...

@Preeti
Thanks!! :)

I can never write those above the head ones...I like top keep'em simple!

Prakhar said...

@Cuckoo

Wah kya baat kahi hai...kash aisa hota...next wl be comin soon!

Thanks for stoppin by! :)

Prakhar said...

@Reflections

I wish any of the two really took the note...m waiting for the sign (if there is one) !

Prakhar said...

@Keshi

Hey..m fine...nd ya that scary face is mine :D

Keshi said...

u look great! not scary at all...so dun try. lol!

Keshi.