Monday, October 27, 2008

You and me..

I want this to be beautiful
..as beautiful as you are

What should I call you .. I don't know
but you know it won't matter

I never asked...and you never said
and I just loved the silence

I don't want to...but you should go now
...its not the place for you.



A dream...too perfect to be true
I knew...from the beginning

You know...I will forget you one day
perhaps its not meant to be

Words are words...words will be words
but you...you will be poetry...always

I don't want to...let you go
please stay..stay for a while...will you?

66 comments:

Voice said...

yeh kya 2 feelings ki fight hai kya

>>but you should go now
...its not the place for you
.let you go
please stay..stay for a while...will you?

contrasting lines...

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explanation note please

Voice said...

explanation sunane k baad i liked it

:)

others
mujhe explanation batane ko mana kia prakhar ne :)

Keshi said...

Im staying Prakhar...dun cry! ;-)

jokes apart I really loved this one! So random, carefree and genuine.


**I never asked...and you never said
and I just loved the silence


LOVED those lines the best! sometimes silence between 2 souls TELLS it all. :)

Keshi.

Jagjit said...

Nice one!

HP said...

heyy! nice one!

have a happy n safe Diwali!

Reflections said...

U better make up ur mind soon or she'll slip out of ur hands:-D

But jokes apart....really good!!!!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

Beautiful :-)

Prakhar said...

@Bhav

Dhanyawaad dost :)...ab se har poem par tumhe explanation free :D

Prakhar said...

@Keshi

**LOVED those lines the best! sometimes silence between 2 souls TELLS it all. :)**

does silence tells both?...I really wish it do!

Prakhar said...

@Jagjit

Thanks buddy! :)

Prakhar said...

@hp

Thanks...nd Happy Deepawali to you too :)

Prakhar said...

@reflection

Thanks :)...its not abt her :)

Prakhar said...

@Raaji

Danke! :)

Keshi said...

u said THANK YOU FRIEND...but

**ab se har poem par tumhe explanation free

? :)



**does silence tells both?...I really wish it do!

I meant the silence between 2 ppl tells it all...may not tell both of em. I know wut u mean.


beautiful song! One of my favs.


Keshi.

d gypsy! said...

well written...

pretty emo...

Prakhar said...

@Keshi

Actually he (Voice) says he dun appreciate poems that much..coz he dun understand the context...so he want a prelude for every poem

**I know wut u mean. **

:)(No words..what can I say)

Yes...its one of my fvrt too...nd goes so well with the post! :)

Prakhar said...

@ gypsy (better than sinner :D)

Thanks!

its only emotions! :)

Eesha Duggal said...

I never asked...and you never said
and I just loved the silence....

I loved this line so much, beautiful!!!

Ps said...

This needs the strings of a guitar and a beautiful deep voice and a moonlit night.
Look what u've done--U've got me feeling all romantic and wistful now :-)
Cheers
Preeti

Prakhar said...

@eesha

Thanks a lot :)

Silence at times keep one goin!

Prakhar said...

@Preeti

How I wished i cud play guitar :D..rest i can manage :)

**U've got me feeling all romantic and wistful now**

now that made my day :)...it gives me some faith in my writing...i was loosing it! Thanks a ton! :)

Prianca said...

hi
came across ur blog
surprised to find dat
u're a poet, nd a good one at dat
dis composition was simple, yet left me with mixed feelings.

Words are words...words will be words
but you...you will be poetry...always
i loved these lines...

i cnt write poetry coz i fail to put my emotions in a concised manner, in few lines bt i have deep respect for ppl who can/try to write poems.


i heard this somewhere nd i guess it is very true for your compositions

if it seems an easy read, great effort has gone into writing it.

Creation said...

I am toh in love!!!

Let people guess with you or your poem.... lol.

anyways..
jokes apart..

"Words are words...words will be words
but you...you will be poetry...always"

Those lines have immense depth in them!

"I never asked...and you never said
and I just loved the silence"

Somethings are better left unsaid.. arent they??

Beautiful...

Chriz said...

i stayed.. but em no gay.. stayed to say happy diwali..
have a great rocking season bro.. that was a nice piece of poetry

Chriz said...

i stayed.. but em no gay.. stayed to say happy diwali..
have a great rocking season bro.. that was a nice piece of poetry

Still thinking said...

I like relationships too when they are not defined :)

'You know...I will forget you one day' - Is this possible dear?

It's beautiful and deep.

Prakhar said...

@Prianca

Hii.. Thanks a lot for stopping by :)


**i cnt write poetry coz i fail to put my emotions in a concised manner **

blv me...u can...all u got to do is try...

**if it seems an easy read, great effort has gone into writing it.**

really true...effort i dun know...but lots of emotions :)...m glad you liked it :)

Prakhar said...

@Creation


**I am toh in love!!!

Let people guess with you or your poem.... lol**

heheh...Thanks dear :)

**Somethings are better left unsaid.. arent they??**

May be..sometimes..nd sometimes you wish someone is listening..even if you are not sayin anythin..

Beautiful...

Prakhar said...

@Chriz

Thanks buddy...Happy Deepawali to you too!

Prakhar said...

@Still Thinking

**You know...I will forget you one day' - Is this possible dear**

Well probably..I m not sure abt that..

Thanks a lot :)...Happy Deepawali!

Heart'n'Soul said...

so dan genuine - really liked it, especially the lines

** Words are words...words will be words
but you...you will be poetry...always

simle n so damn beautiful :)

Sweetstickychewy said...

This poem goes beyond juz words. So much hidden truth in between the lines that speaks much.

An impressive write up.:D

*smiles*

Keshi said...

:)

Keshi.

Creation said...

"May be..sometimes..nd sometimes you wish someone is listening..even if you are not sayin anythin..

Beautiful..."

khu ke comment ko hi 'beautiful'??

Sahi ja rahe ho!!

Creation said...

"May be..sometimes..nd sometimes you wish someone is listening..even if you are not sayin anythin..

Beautiful..."

khu ke comment ko hi 'beautiful'??

Sahi ja rahe ho!!

Prakhar said...

arre nahin...vo beautiful tumhe address kiya tha !! :D


hahaha...arre i copied your comment...and then replied to it..
vo last wala beautiful rah gaya !! :D

WarmSunshine said...

This is so wonderful man... I mean... yes i can feel it in my heart what you've said is so true. i have this special someone in my life who's a part of me. but we were and are and will always be separata. crazy crazy life. you gotta leave so much behind.

Prakhar... i wana tell him to stay for a little while longer. I can't...!!!

Anyway, wonderful post. I'm your fan already with this post.
I promise to keep visiting :)

Rock on dude! :)

WarmSunshine said...

This is so wonderful man... I mean... yes i can feel it in my heart what you've said is so true. i have this special someone in my life who's a part of me. but we were and are and will always be separate. crazy crazy life. you gotta leave so much behind.

Prakhar... i wana tell him to stay for a little while longer. I can't...!!!

Anyway, wonderful post. I'm your fan already with this post.
I promise to keep visiting :)

Rock on dude! :)

Prakhar said...

@Warm Sunshine

you know...the emotion remains..with you ..nothing can separate them...nd all one can ask is for them to stay for a while..

**i wana tell him to stay for a little while longer**

some other time I wud have told you to ask him to stay..
but now m not sure abt that..silence can be painful..

neways...m glad...u liked the post

Thanks for stopping by :)

Creation said...

ahh.. lol.. k..


btw... blog updated

Keshi said...

Prakhar my Diwali post is up :)

Keshi.

joiedevivre said...

waah..
bohot hi khoobsurat

Echo said...

truly awesome...

Aditi said...

nice one :)
keep blogging

Prakhar said...

@joie

Dhanyawaad Joie ji :D

Prakhar said...

@echo

Thanks a ton :)

Prakhar said...

@aditi

Thanks for stopping by :)

Sahefa said...

hey dude!!!
good one!

Prakhar said...

@Sahefa

Thanks a lot :)

Blue Kite Dreamz said...

"What should I call you .. I don't know but you know it won't matter

I never asked...and you never said
and I just loved the silence"


It takes a lot of inside caos to spill out so much in few words.. most of the times..caos's can be beautiful...and that beauty reflects in your expressions :)

deepshikha gupta said...

beautiful
you are a hell of a writer

Prakhar said...

@Blue Kite Dreamz

Well there indeed is some turmoil...nd its about that turmoil only...

thanks :)

Prakhar said...

@deepshikha

Thanks a lot :)

Heart'n'Soul said...

WHns the next update?

WarmSunshine said...

Hi

Came by your post after so many days. But hey, no new post... where are you? :)

Keshi said...

ty so much for ur beautiful words and for the warmth in ur heart Prakhar. I'll see ya soon ok. HUGGGGGGGGGZ!

TC n keep smiling. I'll miss ya too!

Keshi.

Red Soul said...

wow this is beautiful. why dont u update plz :)


p.s. that song rite now. tum ho toh. is a beautiful song!

Beauty and the BEast said...

uncertainty makes a rock fragile;
cloaks sunshine in invisible black...
am running to put the miles between us;
yet your memories keep calling me back.

When I wanted to stay you said it was alright to go...
When I left you wanted me to stay;
When raindrops make the sunshine go
Can they really make the day bright again?

Phew!! I finally made it here and this is by far one of your most loved poems, especially by me... :)

bhagguhey said...

I never asked...and you never said
and I just loved the silence

awesum feeling man

Prakhar said...

@Heart n Soul & WarmSunshine

..pretty soon...two lines to go

Prakhar said...

@Keshi

You are welcome...go njoy the break :)

Prakhar said...

@Red Soul

Thanks for stopping by...wl update soon :)

Prakhar said...

@ BnB

Beautifully done...be it story tellin..or poetry..u r fabulous..

m glad u liked it :)

Prakhar said...

@bhagguhey

Thanks for stopping by :)

Kiran Sawhney said...

Why is she not staying? why is she just a poetry? is she real?

Prakhar said...

@Kiran

Its not about "She"...its about the feeling of attraction/infatuation/love...m not sure what this feelin is!

"You" is that feeling...not a person!