Thursday, November 20, 2008

............................

Melts like a chocolate
when I see her

Stuck on a song
am I waiting for her?

Torn paper from left pocket
..telling her ..asking her

Am I writing all this
...is it her?


Misses a beat or two
when I think of her

An amazing night in Paris or a gloomy day
why do I miss her?

Little faith with little fear
..little is the time for me and her

Does she know all this..
..shall I tell her?

28 comments:

Reflections said...

aaaahhhhh....so so romantic:-)).
Lovely!!!!!!!

Chriz said...

dont tell her... it doesnt make much of a difference even if you tell her...

a good way to pen down your one-thought feelings.. effective way bro..

Divya said...

Every person deserves to be told they are special, u never know how much it might mean to them.

beautiful again :)

Beauty and the BEast said...

Whatever are you waiting for? Go tell her!!
I mean even if she might not miss you the way you do...

She will at least know that she is being so wonderfully missed...

and trust me for a woman THAT counts :)

aqua gurl said...

wow....you have a nice space here...

loved the song playing....i was gng to add the same one to my page...:)

And about her.....go tell her!!!!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

ahh... the longings... sigh

deepshikha gupta said...

wow!!!
beautiful

Diva said...

If you love her so much, She must be deserving enough to know it as well....
Hope you'll let her kno :) :)

"If you have kind words to say,
Say them now.
Tomorrow may not come your way,
Do a kindness while you may,
Loved ones will not always stay;
Say them now."
Do it now, Do it now, Do it now!!

Still thinking said...

Yes, do tell her, there's nothing to lose in any which way :)

'..little is the time for me and her' - Why? This line makes me nervous.

Prianca said...

i loved dis post so much
few words which beautifully exhibited the fears, desires nd emotions you had weaved into this scribble
nd yes, TELL HER ASAP ......**wink**

Kiran Sawhney said...

tell her...dont wait

Akshay said...

omg ...night in Paris..... wtf.... tell her..... lol

Aditi ''Jiggs'' said...

if u havnt
do tell her
these words r meant to be shared

joiedevivre said...

oohh
yaha kuch bohot hi cute sa likha hai kisi ne
:)

Sweetstickychewy said...

Tell her when you feel its right to tell her...

Cheers!:D

Mys Lyke Meeh said...

hey...tell her, no harm in trying...u don't know what's store for you unless you try...come on, just tell her...

just tell her....

anyway, take care!

Keshi said...

beautiful!

hope all is well with ya and that u n ur family r safe. TC!

Keshi.

WarmSunshine said...

sooo romantic...

ya.. go tell her :)

Keshi said...

Prakar u'd be happy to know Im bak :)

Keshi.

Zee said...

go for it!

Zee said...

go for it!

Keshi said...

Prakar why r ya feeling so lonely? I thought I was bak :) HUGS!

Keshi.

kunal said...

lost ur heart?? go tell her before u loose ur mind :)

Divya said...

when's d next one? waiting :(

Heart'n'Soul said...

UH - i hope u have already told her!!!

WHAT ARE YOU WAITIN FOR... cummmmonnnnn TELL HER
:D

Voice said...

bol de
tujhme rab dikhta hai :P

Prats said...

Thats a very heartening poem...
But why wait?? why fear...
just go ahead and say what she needs to hear

Heart'n'Soul said...

update?
update?
update?