Thursday, January 15, 2009

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कुछ कहना है तुमसे...सुनो ना

सांझ के आसमां से रंगी हैं आंखें
मुस्कान एक मखमली सुबह सी
आफ़ताब से पिघली ओस की बूंदें
अधूरे चांद के इंतज़ार में अधूरी सी रात...

कुछ कहना है तुमसे...
एक तस्वीर है
एक तुम हो

23 comments:

shahid said...

is it you waiting to tell or you telling already?

Saanjh bhi hai subah bhi hai
Aftab bhi hai chand bhi hai
Tum bhi ho aur tasweer bhi ..

well thought of with good n simple lines [:)]

Keshi said...

ok then :)

Keshi.

Chriz said...

thank you shahid for breaking the code... gives me enuff reasons to learn reading hindi

Chriz said...

thank you shahid for breaking the code... gives me enuff reasons to learn reading hindi

I Walk Alone!!! said...

Loved it... Simple and well said...

kunal said...

kya likhte ho tum..simply wah wah

Divya said...

my favourites are changing fast...hmmmm

wat does dat say....dat u are putting down some incredibily beautiful lines :)

Anonymous said...

Shahid and prakhar. Good Job

Samajh me to aya nahi.. as usual

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meaning of aftaab please? I used to think it is the sun. but usase osh kaise pighlegi...

~bhav

Prakhar said...

@Shahid
Thanks mitr! :)...sahi kaha...sab kuch hai..aur sab connected hai :)

@Keshi
Thanks...i wish I had written it in english...you cud have read it then :)

@Chriz
You can understand hindi??
Here it is in hinglish :)

Kuch kahna hai tumse..suno na

Saanjh ke aasmaan se rangi hain aaknhen
muskaan ek makhmali subah si
aaftab se pighali oos ki boondein
adhoore chaand ke intezzar me adhoori raat..

kuch kahna hai tumse...
ek tasweer hai
ek tum ho

Prakhar said...

@I walk alone

Thanks a lot :)

@Kunal

Dhanyawaad bandhu :)

@Divya
Thanks for such a luvly comment :)

Prakhar said...

@bhav

Chal agli baar tujhe poora explanation denge :)

aaftab is sun indeed...nd how cant it melt oos ki boondein? :)

Voice said...

prakhar
becoz it is already liquid :)

tum poets bhi kya kya kar do... kam hi hai

Heart'n'Soul said...

nice one
i lovethe last lines

ek tasveer hai
ek tum ho

AWEOSME

Swats said...

Well, I really have the gall to ask u..Whts the meaning of Aftab?

Thnx for stopping by :)

Keshi said...

hey come n take part in my current post :)

Keshi.

Prakhar said...

@Bhav

Dost liquid kaise hui ?? :D...khair rahne de yeh discussion..poetic liberty maan le :D

@H n S

thanks a lot :)

@Swats
Aftab is indeed SUN :)


Thank you too for stopping by :)

How do we know said...

wow!! Brief and very poetic!!

Megs said...

simple & expressive lines....:)
nicely written .:)

ranjana said...

wow.n so beautiful and romantic :) smells like true love.

Prakhar said...

@how do we know

Thanks a lot :)..Thanks for stopping by!

@Megs
Thanks :)...Welcome to this blog :)

@Ranjana
:) ...thanks...true love you say...i dun know abt that...may be curiosity...attraction..i really dun kno..

mayz said...

wow!!! that was really nice

deepshikha gupta said...

amazing lines

so less written yet so much conveyed

Prakhar said...

@Mayz

Thanks buddy :)

@deepshikha

Thats all I feel when I see the pic :)