Wednesday, March 04, 2009

प्यासा

मैं शराबी नहीं...

छलका ज़रूर था जाम
लेकिन मैं शराबी नहीं

बेपरवाह झूमा था कभी
पर मैं शराबी नहीं

थोडा सा बहका था तभी
पर मैं शराबी नहीं

अब गम है की खाली है जाम
लेकिन मैं शराबी नहीं

बची एक अनबुझी प्यास है उसकी
लेकिन वो शराब नहीं...

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

pee leta hu main kabhi kabhi
magar main sharabi nahi :)

good good
u r perfecting ur poem writing skills

~Voice

Femin Susan said...

Good one.

Prakhar said...

@bhav

correct hai...mai sharabi nahi!! :)

dhanyawaad dost..bas likh lete hain thoda bahot..magar hum shayar to nahi!

@ Femin Susan

Thanks! :)

everything burns... said...

hmmm...nice... but u sure there is a word like unbujhi...coz other than tht word...th last 2 lines were just beautiful....

crasiezt said...

Tussi shayar ho?? wah wah..chha gaye tussi:D

Prakhar said...

@Jahnabi

Thanks!

yes I think unbujhi is there..i googled it too :D!

@Crasiezt

Mai shayar to nahi... bas yuhin kabhi kabhi likh leta hun :)

joiedevivre said...

"yeh pyas hai badi"...PEPSI
:p
jokes apart..nice hai

Tabitha said...

Hey...Thank u for visiting my blog...Keep writin!!

Prakhar said...

@Joie

hahha...good one ..yeh pyas pepsi se bhi badi hai re! :D

@Tabitha

Thank you too for stopping by...cheers :)

Adisha said...

Wowiee !!!! Main sharaabi nahi ... kya baat hai ... very nicely captured the essence of a sharabi , who always denies the truth ...


Cheers,
adisha

Still thinking said...

Toh yeh pyass kiski hain? :)
I truly liked the analogy.

Prakhar said...

@Adisha

hehe :D...sach me..mai sharabi nahi :D

@Still thinking

Wahi..jiski pyass aur aas sabko hai :D

Thanks!

the poet manque said...

kabhi mil tu mujhko mere dost
kuch piyenge mil ke saath kabhi
dhundenge saaki is gam ka
par hinge haat main jaam nahi


hats off man!