Friday, March 13, 2009

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कल शाम देखा आसमां
माहताब ना था

फ़लक ढका अब्र से
पर बरसा ना था

आरज़ू इस दिल की
खामोश मन्नत थी...सुनी तुमने?


सडक देखी खिडकी से आज
भीगी सी, इतराती सी

रही होगी महक कुछ देर
सौंधी सी, अपनी सी

पर मैं ना था

देखा ना तुमने...मैं नहीं था

तो ये अरज मेरी...कि कल फ़िर
एक बार फ़िर...बरसो ना...

27 comments:

Still thinking said...

'तो ये अरज मेरी...कि कल फ़िर
एक बार फ़िर...बरसो ना... ' - Hai, hai, kya kehney!

The only words I can use after reading this poem is 'so sweet' :D

joiedevivre said...

what is mahtaba?? yaar
meri hindi..urdu dono weak hai :(

Voice said...

fir se thoda bouncer ho gaya

Divya said...

last lines hold the magic :)
beautiful :)

commited to life said...

what do mean by mahtab

loved the last two lines
and the ques..'dekha tumne main nahi tha..'

the poem reflects the both sides of emotions.. the dejection disappointment and the hope

Prakhar said...

@Still thinking

Shukriya ji :)..so sweet of u!!


@Joie

Mahtaab is Moon...koi baat nahi...hindi movie dekho khoob ..poori hindi urdu seekh jaaoge :D

Prakhar said...

@bhav

arre bouncer waali kya baat hai...baarish hui...humko bheegna tha...nahi bheeg paaye..thats it..yahi to likha hai :D

@Divya

Thanku ji! :)

Prakhar said...

@deepshikha

Thank u !!

Mahtaab is moon..

you got it spot on...it has disappointment..hope nd prayer :)

the poet manque said...

ae dost agar chahne se barasne lage badal
fir kisi ko pyas na hogi
na jhukega insaan fir azano main
aur khuda ki koi baat na hogi


great goin brotha

everything burns... said...

m kinda speechless... ummm yaar itni zyada hindi/urdu ka dose tha ki over head transmission ho gaya....

Prakhar said...

@Poet manque

Sahi kaha...aur isiliye yeh araz meri us khuda se hi hai!

Thanks :)

Prakhar said...

@Jahanabi

hahaha..next time simpler words..btw mahtaab is moon nd Abr is clouds...rest is ok na?

Chriz said...

:(

boohoo..
i dont know hindi..

this is the second time , i am coming here and going back empty handed

Amrita~Ams said...

Its not that i dont know hindi..
Its hard to compile...I read it many tyms...
quite sumthing....
keep up gud work..:)
P.S: thxs for stopping by my blog..keep visiting..

commited to life said...

hi
blog updated

Prakhar said...

@Chriz

Well..next post in english I promise :D

@Amrita~Ams

Thanks for stopping by ! :)

Well poems are really upto one's own interpretation...poet's interpretation can be entirely different

♀»$tuti™ ღ ... said...

wow..........
never read such a gud1....
keep posting!!

Keshi said...

hey Prakhar ty for ur recent comment in my blog!

Im doing good, lotsa work and some exciting trips coming ahead too :) I'll keep u posted. How abt u?

Miss ya!

Keshi.

Prakhar said...

@Stuti

Thanks a lot :)

Arnav said...

really nice :)

commited to life said...

hi
blog updated
do visit..

commited to life said...

and tell me
how do add i-pod to your blog
i wanna do that too!!

Prakhar said...

@Arnav

Thanks :)

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♀»$tuti™ ღ ... said...

nice 1..........
keep posting.......
neways nice pic as well..........:)

gomu said...

wow this is beautiful!!!!! :)

Megs said...

Absolutely beautiful !!