Sunday, March 01, 2009

Random...

I am the water in the bottle
struggling to flow by

A bird in the cage
dreaming the flight in blue sky

Oh my lord
Oh dear god

I am strong for the bottle
just give me the wings to fly

let me be free
let me be free..

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

amen

~bhav

Adisha said...

Such helplessness and hope... Wonderful !!

Thanks for visiting my blog.

Cheers,
adisha

Prakhar said...

@Bhav

Thanks dost :)


@Adisha

yes..there is hope...but its fading away..and thank you too for stopping by :)

deepshikha gupta said...

i like this the best..
i dont have right words for it
just that
i want to use some lines in my blog
if you dont mind..
pls reply so that i can post my blog

regards

Prakhar said...

@Deepshikha

Thanks!!
Please..go ahead and use it..I wud love to read it! :)

commited to life said...

hi

my blog address is livinglifetofull.blogspot.com

and i havnt used ur poem in my post but as an intro to my blog
you can tell me if its not acceptable with you.. i will delete it..

and i have listed you in my blog
again you do tell me if that fine with you

will look forward to your visit

regards
-deepshikha

Prakhar said...

Well I am honored...really...thanks a lot...for liking it so much !

Everything is great with me :)